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Feb 22, 2004 20:25:02 GMT -5
Post by Dreamcatcher on Feb 22, 2004 20:25:02 GMT -5
Persephone awoke from dreamy slumber, shaking sleep from her vaporous aura. Embracing the earth, removing the umber, of winters long dead, drab plethora.
Descending on a southern breeze, omnipotent goddess embracing the sun. Liberating spring with magic keys, her arcane debut is just begun.
Reincarnation of natures essence, resurrected at the vernal equinox. With tears of gentle rain from whence, the vaunting secrets she unlocks.
Changing the earth into an Eden, days conjured by her compassion. Turning all austere, green again, turning skies blue that once were ashen.
With summer solstice on the horizon, her departure looming imminent, she gathers her gossamer wings upon, the south wind from which she was sent.
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Feb 22, 2004 20:30:56 GMT -5
Post by SilverEyes on Feb 22, 2004 20:30:56 GMT -5
Yes, I love the allusion to mythology and such beautiful, wonderful descriptions.
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Feb 24, 2004 1:29:40 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Feb 24, 2004 1:29:40 GMT -5
wonderful imagery...i really enjoyed this piece alot..welcome to poet club!
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Feb 24, 2004 7:38:12 GMT -5
Post by richie on Feb 24, 2004 7:38:12 GMT -5
yes I found this profound in many ways very good writing here, grammer holds up well too. regards Richie.
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Feb 26, 2004 15:10:50 GMT -5
Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 26, 2004 15:10:50 GMT -5
I enjoyed reading this, a good write,I look forward to reading more of you work! ;DJoe
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Feb 26, 2004 16:23:02 GMT -5
Post by leash on Feb 26, 2004 16:23:02 GMT -5
breath-taking. such a relaxing and serene piece.. the diction you used really helped accomplish that effect.
i have nothing more to say that the above posts did not already cover.
excellent work. i hope to read much more of it.
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