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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 21, 2004 16:28:28 GMT -5

** I might have posted this somewhere before, I don't really remember. This is quite an old piece of mine.

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Long laying
slow to move
breathe quietly
must prove

No mistake
never know
without thought
always grow

Hiding there
foolish gain
sneaky proof
all in vain

Secret life
lost in mist
beautiful mind
pounding fist

Last Edit: Feb 24, 2004 20:00:58 GMT -5 by bloodredtears

** Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears

**Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

Todd Novice What if the Hokey Pokey really is what it's all about? D'OH! Posts: 45	What Feb 21, 2004 19:06:18 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Todd on Feb 21, 2004 19:06:18 GMT -5 Hmmm. .....A mysterious little ditty.I like the style of it.Nice write!
	~Knowledge is the true organ of sight,not the eyes.~From the Panchatantra~

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	What Feb 21, 2004 23:16:36 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 21, 2004 23:16:36 GMT -5 I like the format of this piece. The last stanza is my favorite because it reminds me of myself. Nice write.
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JosephScottMorris Apprentice Posts: 157	What Feb 23, 2004 0:52:35 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 23, 2004 0:52:35 GMT -5 Kristine, Excellent poem, I enjoyed reading this one, on the word through, do you mean thought ?Thanks for sharing it! ;DJoe

John Barnett Founders Founder Posts: 994	What Feb 24, 2004 14:47:19 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by John Barnett on Feb 24, 2004 14:47:19 GMT -5 Yes interesting format, and good job!
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bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	What Feb 24, 2004 20:01:44 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Feb 24, 2004 20:01:44 GMT -5 thanks everyone and especially you joe...i did mean thought...i appreciate you catching that! and thanks for all the kind words everyone!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

Eclipse Apprentice It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time. Posts: 222	What Feb 24, 2004 20:19:00 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eclipse on Feb 24, 2004 20:19:00 GMT -5 i love the short lines. it makes for an easy read with a profound meaning to pondor upon. lovely.
	You saw what you get If you take what you take. Look in the eyes of the test. It's all because... Now there's a feeling I get. When I look to the left. But we can never be sensed. Our searching for a sign.

JosephScottMorris Apprentice Posts: 157	What Feb 24, 2004 20:59:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 24, 2004 20:59:40 GMT -5 Kristine, You are most welcome, also this is far from a ditty, and is indeed a great poem! ;DJoe

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	What Mar 2, 2004 22:28:06 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Mar 2, 2004 22:28:06 GMT -5 nice job!
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

Mikepoet Virtuoso Posts: 487	What Mar 29, 2004 14:05:34 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mikepoet on Mar 29, 2004 14:05:34 GMT -5 A spefic referance to something personal. Minds eye of a poet type stuff. ;DI liked it.

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