amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
Posts: 330
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Post by amberputis on Feb 23, 2004 19:21:13 GMT -5
wow this was phenominal! wonderful, wonderful job!!
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 24, 2004 0:47:39 GMT -5
i really enjoyed this piece..you have much talent:) great job!
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 24, 2004 2:09:58 GMT -5
Amber,
Thank you for the great review! ;DJoe
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 24, 2004 2:11:20 GMT -5
Kristine,
Thank you also, for the great review. ;DJoe
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Chaotic_Thetis
Apprentice
Bleed me! For i have witnessed yet remained silent.Slay me! For i had your love and kept it.
Posts: 142
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Post by Chaotic_Thetis on Feb 24, 2004 13:06:05 GMT -5
Nicely done i must say, it was very simply expressed yet held underlying emotions that really struck hard.
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Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
Posts: 222
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Post by Eclipse on Feb 24, 2004 19:20:59 GMT -5
i'm impressed. it's a great piece. just one little pet peeve...punctuation?
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 24, 2004 20:01:18 GMT -5
Chaotic_Thetis,
Thank you for the Great review, and you are correct, sometimes simple words, can cary deep emotions for a message. This is also, as a part 2 poem, from a true experience. ;DJoe
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 24, 2004 20:06:58 GMT -5
Eclipse,
Thank you also for the great review, and I did not wish to use punctuation on this poem, as punctuation is one of my pet peeves as well! I wrote this one in a few different formats, and I liked it best this way. ;DJoe
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 24, 2004 20:46:25 GMT -5
Wonderful write. I like your style.
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 24, 2004 21:14:50 GMT -5
SilverEyes,
Thank you for the Great review! ;DJoe
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