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Post by alostandbrokensoul on Dec 6, 2004 12:47:09 GMT -5
You walked out the door with a simple good bye, three years down the drain I didnt know why.
I cant bear to hear the words "I love you", from anyone else if you only knew.
You walked out the door and out of my life, you said you needed time and I wouldn't be your wife.
Move on, just go and leave me here to grieve, to nurse this broken heart of mine that you shattered when you had to leave.
Now there are roses a dozen or more, with you standing there at my front door.
Im sorry my love that I ever let you go, because I love you but that you already know.
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Wickedblades666
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I Hate Life, but i am stuck in it by my own rules: death is for quitters, i dont quit...
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Post by Wickedblades666 on Dec 6, 2004 17:17:23 GMT -5
good write...the mix of emotions was nice, and it had a great flow, with nice word choice, yet another on your list of good poems
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 5, 2005 17:04:03 GMT -5
i like this piece...how you have a happy ending for something that started out by seeming to be a true heartache! good job
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