Britni
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And when the drops of dew moisten your skin, Do you think of me at all?
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Post by Britni on Jun 10, 2004 23:30:13 GMT -5
No you didn't give up your dreams, Didn't die for my hand, You didn't give me the sun and moon, Didn't build me a house of sand*,
You didn't do anything you said you would, If only I'd love you, Didn't shange the alphabet for me, So it read ILOVEU,
You didn't conquer the world, And make me your "beautiful" queen, You didn't buy me a palace, But that's alright with me,
I watched you fight the battles, Try to build a ladder to the sky, I saw you at the castle gates, Armed and prepared to die,
And though you did none of these, You're still the one I love, It's not about what you've done for me, What's important is what you would've done.
*My step-dad said this to my mom in a card once.
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Post by Mikepoet on Jun 11, 2004 23:59:55 GMT -5
That is awsome!!!
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Post by angel on Jun 22, 2004 1:03:28 GMT -5
ooooooh, i liked the alphabet changing thing. And this flowed extremely well...and I actually liked the rhyming...that is saying something! this was quite enjoybable to read, kudos for you!
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