NeverMore
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May 16, 2004 14:14:15 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on May 16, 2004 14:14:15 GMT -5
you ask me why I love you
My answer is plain to me
I love you so completely
I give it to you free
It's not the beauty of your face
It's not the things you do
It's not the precious words you speak
That's not why I love you
It's not for fortunes that some would have
It's not for pleasures that are new
No not even for the futures sake
No they are not why I love you
It's the person inside your heart
The one that is so true
It's all of who you are inside
That's why I love you
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May 16, 2004 17:04:01 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on May 16, 2004 17:04:01 GMT -5
amazing piece, again...i love this..how it's not about looks or even words...it's about how her character is as a whole, not the individual parts...because i suppose to truly love is to adore every part just not a couple...great piece...  |
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Jun 2, 2004 22:40:09 GMT -5
Post by angel on Jun 2, 2004 22:40:09 GMT -5
I dont like ooey gooey icky sappy crud....but this isnt ooey gooey icky sappy crud...this is aaaaaaaah.....cute...! and it makes your heart go uh-flutter. I really like this poem, very nicely written!
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Jun 13, 2004 11:09:44 GMT -5
Post by Mikepoet on Jun 13, 2004 11:09:44 GMT -5
Thats real sweet. That would steal her heart.
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