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May 13, 2004 23:32:42 GMT -5
Post by shebangs17 on May 13, 2004 23:32:42 GMT -5
you hear it everywhere people write songs about, make movies with lots of it even this poem is about it love love should be something special, not just a game between two people, though they may not feel the same i have been lucky to have experienced it for myself its almost indescribable, too good to be put into words i dont think he feels the same way about me, which is ok because love is about accepting whatever happens. if you really love them, youll let them go and be happy, even if it means you have to sacrifice your desire. i am happy just to be in his life and be his friend, because he has touched me in such a way that i will always be grateful. i dont think he knows how i feel. i DO think he knows i like him, but not that im in love with him. it doesnt bother me as much as i thought it would, because there will come a day when i can tell him how i feel. i just want to thank him and thank God for letting me be a part of his life, even if its only in a small way. im not going to say "i love you" because if i ever do, i want it to be to your face. i will say good night, however.
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May 14, 2004 15:55:28 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on May 14, 2004 15:55:28 GMT -5
very intersting piece here...it seems more like a journal entry towards the end...but it shows your thoughts and expressions which is good....neato! welcome to poet club
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L-O-V-E
May 15, 2004 0:18:33 GMT -5
Post by Mikepoet on May 15, 2004 0:18:33 GMT -5
The love you describe is young and beautiful..I felt that once and it lasted as long as it lasted. I hope this is your lifes mate. Love to me is like an ancient Chinese vase which and all the beauty of an intricate artist beforore it was broken and glued togather many times and is now a wonder to look at but is a broken piece of art glued togather many times. Its still beautiful though.
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L-O-V-E
May 15, 2004 0:52:23 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on May 15, 2004 0:52:23 GMT -5
Love.. it is so many different things.. to so many different people and times.. this poem is great for the thoughts.. myself, I really enjoyed how it was presented... I will for sure be reading more of your works
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