NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on Apr 20, 2004 16:42:37 GMT -5
so many times I look to find the words that fit to tell you all how deep this love has grabbed and held each little breath each thought in time it scares me at times how complete you make me feel how real your words are where my heart feels it must be The three little words we know so well are meant for us to share in life yet even those three words I find can not say it right for they do not go as deep as you are in me I love you more now even then I did yesterday
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 21, 2004 23:46:21 GMT -5
another wonderful piece... you are truly talented....great job!
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Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 27, 2004 0:14:21 GMT -5
Great write Joe...I loved the flow of this poem. It had heart and rythym.....two of my favorite ingredients for a great poem....
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Post by Mikepoet on Apr 29, 2004 1:41:43 GMT -5
I envy to feeling that, that would be a sweet feeling.
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