NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
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Apr 17, 2004 22:15:22 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on Apr 17, 2004 22:15:22 GMT -5
Even in the quietest of days when you are far from my side when time and life keep us from each others arm Thinking of your love and touch my days are filled with time spent dreaming of you and this love that is ours
(you may be able to see I have a few poems to post. I do thank anyone who comments. These boards are proving very good as I see them. Feedback is always helpfull... every kind of feed back)
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Apr 17, 2004 23:44:52 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Apr 17, 2004 23:44:52 GMT -5
i do like this poem a lot...the line "my days are filled with time" kind of threw me at first but after i read it a second time it made sense...great job!
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