Better than I

[Mikepoet]

Your like the beauty held in a rainbow
without the discomfort of rain.
Just as a sigh of relief
that comes from ending of pain.

A lovely rose to be admired
with no worry of a thorn.
Your voice a pretty melody
likened to sounds of a spring morn.

Your soft sweet scent is honeysuckled
I taste your lips divine.
A bright presence fills the room
an iridescent Butterfly.

Sadly I am not worthy
to love one such as you.
You are far better than I
why do you not see this is true.

[bloodredtears]

A lovely rose to be admired
with no worry of a thorn.
Your voice a pretty melody
likened to sounds of a spring morn

this is a wonderful stanza and the entire thing is wonderful also! i really enjoyed it...great job!

[Mikepoet]

Thank you again...This happned about 1987...A freind girl was in a beauty pagent...As she walked to the end of the walkway thing I handed her a rose and her mother took a pic and it came out on front page of paper..She did not win pagent though >:(Then she went to colledge and I realized she was better than me..So I moved on with life and drove 2000 miles and played snowbird for a couple of years...I hope she did well in life..she was so beautiful..

[amberputis]

i loved this, fantastic write...

[Mikepoet]

Thabk you..glad you enjoyed.. ;D