sweetest17sin
Virtuoso
don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 1:11:02 GMT -5
these feelings that i'm feeling i haven't felt for quite a while when you're on my mind all day long and just thinking of you makes me smile
i told myself i wasn't ready for a relationship this strong i was forbidding myself to love again and then you came along
no words can describe my feelings nothing i do would be enough is there really any way of proving when you're this deeply in love?
all i can do is tell you and hope you believe it's true that i really truly am deeply in love w/ you
you mean the world to me although we're miles apart "distance only matters to the mind not to the heart"
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 12, 2004 2:41:24 GMT -5
another really great piece here! good job!
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 12, 2004 23:23:54 GMT -5
I love the last stanza.
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on Feb 13, 2004 12:20:28 GMT -5
interesting...yes a lot like your other poems, but thats alright too, good job.
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