a few questions

[sweetest17sin]

Why, I wonder, is it you
What exactly is it that you do
Why do I love you so
What do you have that others don’t
Why did you get my heart
Why have I loved you from the start
Why is everything you do perfect in my eyes
Why is it you I dream of at night
Why do I feel you’re an angel in disguise
Why do only you give me butterflies
Why, I wonder, is it me
What exactly do I do to make you complete

[bloodredtears]

this is a really good piece...i didn't think the first two lines made sense though...other than that it's great!

[SilverEyes]

The first two lines seem awkward and a little out of place but overall it's a great write.

[amberputis]

well, i enjoyed it, lol. nice job