NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
Posts: 454
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Four
Apr 25, 2004 12:01:45 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on Apr 25, 2004 12:01:45 GMT -5
Deep
is the fear
of moving
past this door
so much hurt
to leave lying on the ground
so much pain
I am leaving behind
yet walk through I shall
what waits for me
on the other side
is in the hands of fate
what has grown in me
is here to stay
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Four
May 2, 2004 22:17:33 GMT -5
Post by PoeticWarfare on May 2, 2004 22:17:33 GMT -5
very impressive poem Nevermore, enjoyed
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Four
May 4, 2004 10:57:21 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on May 4, 2004 10:57:21 GMT -5
i really liked this piece...to me you were saying that no matter what happens your values and beliefs will not change...good job!
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Four
May 7, 2004 2:58:11 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 7, 2004 2:58:11 GMT -5
agree with bloodred here, that's what came through for me too...nice work!
x rinna x
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