Ecstasy

[Alex'z Death Chic]

Drugs... not entirely about darkness, fear and horror though...

Enveloped in darkness' morbid embrace
enticed by its sinful temptation
wrapped up in its bliss
succumbed to its alluring seduction

I can feel the intensity hightening
elated inside, I can feel it grow
gone past the boundaries of my mind
caught up on letting myself go

Provoking the abyss that surrounds me
I can feel its tight grip on my soul
can't breath, I'm so close to suffocating
before its dreaded jaws swallow me whole

I can hear a faint whisper in my ears
the inaudible melody of the glistening rain
I hear it fluttering away with my fears
now numb to everything, I yearn to hear its melody again

Hollow inside, I can feel nothing but a temporary high
blocking my sense and my distorted view of reality
it has become my obsession, the tourniquet of my soul
denied of my redemption, I'm afraid I've gone past my sanity

[bloodredtears]

wow...i've never done drugs of any sort and i don't know if this is from actually experience but it's full of great imagery...great job and welcome to poet club if i haven't done that already!

[Eclipse]

yes i agree. the imagery is wonderful.

the inaudible melody of the glistening rain

that line really stuck with me. nicely done.

[Alex'z Death Chic]

many thankies! This isn't from actual experience... I wrote it when I was listening to a trance cd my friend gave me.

[SilverEyes]

Powerful descriptions, you certainly have a way with words.