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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on Apr 16, 2004 9:32:32 GMT -5
You tease me with your tongue
as it slowly slithers down my chest
creating circles in my belly
your touches excite me more
as they caress every inch of my being
every curve of my body
I slowly melt in your arms
as you smother me with kisses
covering every niche of my mouth
oh god, take me now...
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Post by Mikepoet on Apr 16, 2004 13:29:01 GMT -5
Wow..he he..cold shower.. ;D
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Post by John Barnett on Apr 16, 2004 13:40:25 GMT -5
Lol, Mike. This is a very sexy piece, well done.
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 16, 2004 14:34:49 GMT -5
This is very sensual, nice job ADC.
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Apr 16, 2004 14:51:08 GMT -5
(exiting the shower, drying off) Did I miss anything? Great work!
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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on Apr 20, 2004 6:37:23 GMT -5
thanks guys... didn't think it was sensual enough...
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Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Apr 26, 2004 18:30:27 GMT -5
well i think it's plenty sensual. very sexy write. i liked it.  |
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on May 1, 2004 15:37:35 GMT -5
killer. heh i liked...
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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on May 2, 2004 9:14:20 GMT -5
lol... thanks  |
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Post by Mikepoet on Jul 24, 2004 23:08:30 GMT -5
Had to read it again..  |
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