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SilverEyes
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Silver eyes crying crimson tears.

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Cool Mint Strips Feb 16, 2004 18:12:33 GMT -5

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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 16, 2004 18:12:33 GMT -5

I have an idea
Flitting through my head
You
And me
Kissing in the dark
Our tongues are intertwining
But I’m
Just a little naughty
Cool mint
Listerine
Strip
On my tongue
Then dragged across
The roof of your mouth
I feel you shiver and shake
In my encircling arms
Let’s do that again
You say
Let’s have another
Mind-blowing
Body-shaking
Cool minty kiss

You know I'm dying to live
Until I'm ready
I'm ready to die

~Jonny Lang~

John Barnett Founders Founder Posts: 994	Cool Mint Strips Feb 16, 2004 19:46:03 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by John Barnett on Feb 16, 2004 19:46:03 GMT -5 Interesting piece. Very, very sensual and descriptive. Possibly an ad for Listerine strips? LOL!
	Jwalaeb

amberputis Virtuoso ~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~ Posts: 330	Cool Mint Strips Feb 16, 2004 19:49:36 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by amberputis on Feb 16, 2004 19:49:36 GMT -5 interesting? yes, well written? most definitely. I love the descriptions as well
	Amber

serenepoetress Apprentice Posts: 84	Cool Mint Strips Feb 16, 2004 22:10:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by serenepoetress on Feb 16, 2004 22:10:47 GMT -5 How very original! I found the piece "minty" re "fresh"ing! pardon the pun!
	Copyright 2004 Laura Mae Oldham-Brownell

imaginary goddess #5 Novice shape me into something I never will be, and you'll find out this facade was an escape from reality. Posts: 69	Cool Mint Strips Feb 18, 2004 23:01:28 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by imaginary goddess #5 on Feb 18, 2004 23:01:28 GMT -5 very original - lol, and naughty (playful?) too. i loved it - lianna
	- Lianna Last one left of our lineage - don't forget us. imaginary goddesses. "shallowed up in the sound of my screaming cannot cease for the fear of silent nights oh how i long for the deep sleep dreaming the goddess of imaginary light..." - Evanescence

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	Cool Mint Strips Feb 21, 2004 1:25:33 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 21, 2004 1:25:33 GMT -5 lol, this was a unique poem. i really liked it! nice job! melissa!
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

Wolf Apprentice In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends. Posts: 124	Cool Mint Strips Feb 21, 2004 2:11:16 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Wolf on Feb 21, 2004 2:11:16 GMT -5 I *love* this! Sitting here giggling (yes, this old' codger is giggling), envisioning the fella's surprise - and thinking "what if it had been an Altoid instead?" ;D VERY well done, absolutely delightful! Wolf, still giggling
	Not only the dead haunt the living

Seth Virtuoso Root Beer Float Play something country! Posts: 411	Cool Mint Strips Feb 21, 2004 21:15:59 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Seth on Feb 21, 2004 21:15:59 GMT -5 Very nice... I loved this very much...
	"I see the eternal misery. I feel the caress of beauty around me. I dream of the colors in your crystalized fantasy... Hoping one day, I'll be swept away from reality...

JosephScottMorris Apprentice Posts: 157	Cool Mint Strips Feb 23, 2004 7:52:59 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 23, 2004 7:52:59 GMT -5 This is a good write,Thanks for sharing it! ;DJoe

Eclipse Apprentice It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time. Posts: 222	Cool Mint Strips Feb 23, 2004 15:33:31 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eclipse on Feb 23, 2004 15:33:31 GMT -5 haha this poem rocks. well i got my listerine strips...now to find someone to kiss... mwhaha!
	You saw what you get If you take what you take. Look in the eyes of the test. It's all because... Now there's a feeling I get. When I look to the left. But we can never be sensed. Our searching for a sign.

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Cool Mint Strips Feb 25, 2004 18:04:33 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 25, 2004 18:04:33 GMT -5 Thanks for all the favorable reviews. I really appreciate them. Oh, and Eclipse, have fun.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

Sathien Guest	Cool Mint Strips Feb 29, 2004 13:26:28 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Sathien on Feb 29, 2004 13:26:28 GMT -5 now that's refreshing poetry! loved this! ahahaha... yes, a possible Listerine ad!

X x K e l Z x X Chapter Leader Just Me Posts: 1,035	Cool Mint Strips Mar 27, 2004 13:14:23 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by X x K e l Z x X on Mar 27, 2004 13:14:23 GMT -5 yay, I liked this one too, great poem!
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Todd Novice What if the Hokey Pokey really is what it's all about? D'OH! Posts: 45	Cool Mint Strips Apr 13, 2004 14:40:51 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Todd on Apr 13, 2004 14:40:51 GMT -5 Hubba hubba!Good write here!
	~Knowledge is the true organ of sight,not the eyes.~From the Panchatantra~

T.J. Barber Administrator Founder I would advise you to stay on my good side!!! Posts: 937	Cool Mint Strips Apr 13, 2004 15:02:06 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 13, 2004 15:02:06 GMT -5 Somehow I missed this one. Well, I'm gonna leave it at this. This reminds me of a piece written by Mikepoet. " why men wake up with boners''.... I think you all get the picture...ha ha ha ha
	No man is an island in itself...Therefore, never send for whom the bell tolls. It tolls for the''

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Post by imaginary goddess #5 on Feb 18, 2004 23:01:28 GMT -5

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Post by Wolf on Feb 21, 2004 2:11:16 GMT -5

Post by Seth on Feb 21, 2004 21:15:59 GMT -5

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Post by Eclipse on Feb 23, 2004 15:33:31 GMT -5

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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Mar 27, 2004 13:14:23 GMT -5

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Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 13, 2004 15:02:06 GMT -5