maybe

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

time beat me to the finish line
she cheated me again
and left me forlorn

maybe i would have been
a little more forgiving
too blissful, your ignorance
as i rotted away

chance just up and left
too early for our date
as i turned the corner
she's in cahoots with
that wretched clock

regret looms over me
raining guilt on my party
i never wrote you an invite
i should have made the effort

maybe i should have
tried to be a little less me
for a little more of you.

[angel]

ooooh i really like this one! Very creative

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

invisible!
thank you, this was totally a moment of weakness...lol.
x r x

[Mikepoet]

I have the utmost faith in you rinna, you are so strong. I admire you for your tenacity and will, it radiates though your computer presence everywhere I have had the pleasure of writing beside you. This was a good writing, as unique as rinna. ;D