Todd
Novice
What if the Hokey Pokey really is what it's all about? D'OH!
Posts: 45
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Because
Jan 26, 2004 14:36:31 GMT -5
Post by Todd on Jan 26, 2004 14:36:31 GMT -5
Because I know not truth,I know not such, I sit here and wonder much, and seek to know with minds eye. To think of theories,to contemplate. While seeking God I do so, who lifts from me clouds sunk low. In whom I will forever trust, blue skies or lowly dust. And the day will come, here under earths sun, the great day of the Lord, when this wiil be thus, dust rained upon will be ground for life, which wields not sword, is without strife. Without water from above, we know not God, nor Gods love.
Todd J. Caudill
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Jan 26, 2004 22:06:36 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Jan 26, 2004 22:06:36 GMT -5
i really like the last three lines of this piece...great job!
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Feb 5, 2004 23:22:57 GMT -5
Post by SilverEyes on Feb 5, 2004 23:22:57 GMT -5
"blue skies or lowly dust"
I don't know why but I love that line.
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Because
Feb 19, 2004 7:49:24 GMT -5
Post by richie on Feb 19, 2004 7:49:24 GMT -5
Hi again Todd, this is intresting and very well thoughtout just a few words to look over and you have a good poem, I do like your style Todd. regards Richie.
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Feb 22, 2004 12:20:07 GMT -5
Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 22, 2004 12:20:07 GMT -5
Todd, I like your poem, and agree with Richie's review. ;)Joe
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
Posts: 330
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Because
Feb 22, 2004 14:55:02 GMT -5
Post by amberputis on Feb 22, 2004 14:55:02 GMT -5
there's something about this that i like a lot...great thought
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Feb 24, 2004 5:44:25 GMT -5
Post by kronicdaze on Feb 24, 2004 5:44:25 GMT -5
I love the last 3 or 4 lines of this...good sh*t...lata
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sweetest17sin
Virtuoso
don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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Because
Feb 26, 2004 22:52:17 GMT -5
Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 26, 2004 22:52:17 GMT -5
nice job!
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