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Todd
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What if the Hokey Pokey really is what it's all about? D'OH!

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Beyond Jan 11, 2004 14:24:17 GMT -5

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Post by Todd on Jan 11, 2004 14:24:17 GMT -5

Beyond self imposed walls
are the ways of Heaven.
Beyond windows,unseen,
paradise does gleam.
Beckoning and true to me and you.
To mind this is thus,
to be learned which is much.
To not seek and wonder
is great for to blunder.
Seek the Lord whose teaching
will be far and wide reaching.
Into eternity will be peace,
its state will not cease.

Todd J.Caudill

~Knowledge is the true organ of sight,not the eyes.~From the Panchatantra~

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Beyond Jan 11, 2004 18:44:02 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Jan 11, 2004 18:44:02 GMT -5 i really like this piece...the message is very clear and very good! great job!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Beyond Feb 5, 2004 23:30:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 5, 2004 23:30:11 GMT -5 Todd said: To not seek and wonder is great for to blunder. Those lines just made me smile. I like the flow of this piece too. Nice write.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

richie Virtuoso Posts: 302	Beyond Feb 19, 2004 7:45:45 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by richie on Feb 19, 2004 7:45:45 GMT -5 I really like this Todd, if I may say there are just a little bit of revising on one or two words. well done Richie.
	from childhood's hour I have not been as others were-I have not seen as others saw-I could not bring my passions from a common spring from the same sourse I have not taken my sorrow: I could not awaken my heart to joy at the same tone and all I loved I loved alone.

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	Beyond Feb 21, 2004 1:41:03 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 21, 2004 1:41:03 GMT -5 im not sure why, but i really like this piece. awesome job! melissa!
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

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Post by Todd on Jan 11, 2004 14:24:17 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Jan 11, 2004 18:44:02 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Feb 5, 2004 23:30:11 GMT -5

Post by richie on Feb 19, 2004 7:45:45 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 21, 2004 1:41:03 GMT -5

Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 16, 2004 14:38:23 GMT -5