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Post by alostandbrokensoul on May 24, 2004 20:38:07 GMT -5
Blood floods around me flowing from the wound I'm dying violently, the way it should be Dying because of you. I loved you but your love wasnt true, my now my hands are cold, my lips have now turned blue my breath is getting shorter. All of this from you my heart is gone ripped from my chest something terrible went wrong and so invain is my death All of this for you.
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Post by Mikepoet on May 28, 2004 19:48:43 GMT -5
This is so sad.
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Seth
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Post by Seth on May 31, 2004 18:30:07 GMT -5
now my hands are cold, my lips have now turned blue my breath is getting shorter. All of this from you
Hm, intriguing write, I felt the sadness and the pain in this piece. Mike is right, this is quite sad. Wonderfully written.
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