L.O.V.E.

[T.J. Barber]

This piece was written under some extreme inspiration and I fear that it may be a little intense. However, I knew you guys could handle it.

Love is a 4 letter word.

L is for lyer

O is for opressed emotions

V is for vicious cold hearted b*tch

E is for the eternal damnation it brings my soul.

Love add to the depression of my mind and fills my heart with hatred.

Dedicated to love and all the victims of it.

[John Barnett]

Great write my friend, unfortunately, I can also identify with your words here and it it sadly true. Good luck with the love stuff, it's a many splintered thing...

[angel]

u caught me off guard. Usually love is all the mushy mushy lovey dovey crud you always get....WAY different perspective. And very true. You took the negative point of the feeling/word. Very nice, kudos for you

[_black phoenix_]

I'm pretty sure that "lyer" is not a word. Were you trying to say "liar"?

To be perfectly honest, this piece did nothing for me. It is boring.. I have read far too many poems similar to this. If you can strengthen the emotion(the hatred, pain, etc.) then it might be more effective.

.. Of course, that is only one opinion.