NeverMore
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And Yet
May 19, 2004 23:56:38 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on May 19, 2004 23:56:38 GMT -5
you lied yet I loved you you cheated yet I loved you
you accused yet I loved you you fell yet I loved you
you destroyed me yet I loved you you left yet I love you
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May 20, 2004 10:35:57 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on May 20, 2004 10:35:57 GMT -5
simply put and very heartwrenching...the repetition works with this well...good job!
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NeverMore
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Beethoven Looking f*g
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And Yet
May 20, 2004 18:43:52 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on May 20, 2004 18:43:52 GMT -5
*S* Thank you... I am not sure who I am angrier at when I think of this poem.. the one it is to or the fool who wrote it *S*
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