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Apr 30, 2004 19:33:23 GMT -5
Post by TheOne on Apr 30, 2004 19:33:23 GMT -5
First comes Tyler, then comes Juhl
then its Mike, you kissing f*ckin' fool
Why can't you just be faithful?
slut's your brand new label
Maybe you should be more clear next time
maybe you should let me know when your not mine
Just thought I'd ease your worries... this sh*t's over
f*ck caring, sh*t luck, a no-leaf clover
And to think, after 2 I still trusted you
but not to let me down, a 3rd is what you do
And now there's... No More Chances
f*ck you b*tch and f*ck your answers
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amberputis
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~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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May 1, 2004 15:14:06 GMT -5
Post by amberputis on May 1, 2004 15:14:06 GMT -5
wow, i definitely sensed some strong emotions here, heh i dont blame you though, but nice job.. way to let it all out
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May 1, 2004 17:16:47 GMT -5
Post by PoeticWarfare on May 1, 2004 17:16:47 GMT -5
heh..do I smell a metallica reference in your words?
can't say I blame you.....there's only one type of person I truely hate, and its the kind that would play someone for a fool
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May 1, 2004 19:07:43 GMT -5
Post by Mikepoet on May 1, 2004 19:07:43 GMT -5
Be strong cause that is a redundancy you do not need in your life.
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May 1, 2004 19:12:16 GMT -5
Post by angel on May 1, 2004 19:12:16 GMT -5
Why can't you just be faithful? slut's your brand new label Maybe you should be more clear next time maybe you should let me know when your not mine Wow, I really liked those four lines ^^^^. I just hope that you dont become a cheater because of this, and you realize how much it does hurt for the other person so you wont do it. I guess thats the only good thing that can come from that happening to you. I have been cheated on too....and it sucks. It not only lowers your self confidence, but it hurts, a lot. You expressed this awesomely. Although it didnt have to rhyme, you still did a very nice job and I totally felt your hurt and anger. |
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May 2, 2004 4:41:07 GMT -5
Post by Alex'z Death Chic on May 2, 2004 4:41:07 GMT -5
whoa... angry poem...
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May 5, 2004 15:29:07 GMT -5
Post by John Barnett on May 5, 2004 15:29:07 GMT -5
Very good, interestingly different
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May 5, 2004 16:19:51 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on May 5, 2004 16:19:51 GMT -5
i loved it..and the four lines that angel chose are my favorite lines too...i've never had any body cheat on me...but i know somebody who cheated on someone else and i was sickened by it...this is a great piece full of awesome emotion...welcome to poet club!
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Avatre
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Just around for the words...^.^
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Sept 26, 2004 20:22:08 GMT -5
Post by Avatre on Sept 26, 2004 20:22:08 GMT -5
i like this a lot, and it sticks out a lot in my mind. Verily nicely written.
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Oct 7, 2004 10:17:58 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Oct 7, 2004 10:17:58 GMT -5
ouch. i liked this!
rinna
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Nov 21, 2004 17:13:33 GMT -5
Post by Seth on Nov 21, 2004 17:13:33 GMT -5
Hm, lovely and very deeply mind-consuming.
Wonderful write.
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