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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Apr 28, 2004 22:04:08 GMT -5
I could have had you
My greed stronger than any love
I could have given
The earth stood still
As I heard you walk out the door
And out of my life
So as I rue the day you left
I have nothing else
Where you once stepped
Glorious posies
Each marked with your love
It is now barren
Ugly
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Hunter
Virtuoso
Fallen Angel
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Post by Hunter on Apr 30, 2004 4:28:43 GMT -5
Well done.
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Post by PoeticWarfare on May 1, 2004 17:15:03 GMT -5
very awesome piece indeed
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 2, 2004 3:57:11 GMT -5
th, pw,
thanks for reading guys!
x rinna x
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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on May 2, 2004 4:47:17 GMT -5
I agree... nice write...  |
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 2, 2004 5:13:36 GMT -5
alex (is that you or your significant other? i always get confused),
thanks for reading!!!!
x rinna x
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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on May 2, 2004 7:27:29 GMT -5
umm... alex is the name of my close friend....
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Post by Mikepoet on May 5, 2004 20:30:39 GMT -5
This is a good piece rinna.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 5, 2004 23:24:50 GMT -5
adc, mike,
thanks for reading...
x rInna (no E) x
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Post by Mikepoet on May 11, 2004 8:00:51 GMT -5
I spanked myself..
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 11, 2004 17:55:53 GMT -5
mike, one word: nutbag.  x rinna x |
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Post by Mikepoet on May 11, 2004 20:21:06 GMT -5
We need a way to get whippings around here if we want them!!! ;D
rinna...can I pout? ;D
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