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Post by Broken hope on Dec 13, 2004 20:04:45 GMT -5
If we met tomorrow Would it stop the sorrow
If we fell in love for the first time Would it stop these endless rhymes
Sometimes when i think It causes me to go to the drink
I've made my mistakes and im not proud Done in manners not so loud
Now i ask, do you love me still Cause i miss you and this feeling kills
And do you love me like you did The first love of young kids
I really can't say i believe When i feel i've been decieved
my whole life i was lied to Told love would get me through
When my mother was crying every night And my father was always picking a fight
With everyone and anyone who would listen Maybe thats why i turned to the blade in the kitchen
But it's raining in winter and its gorgeous Shame to turn such beauty into a crimson whoridness
Sometimes lovers turn to hate in trying times And sometimes the best thing to say is a lie
When love can fullfil their dreams But love might not be what it seems
My eyes are dark from what i've seen I learned what i love you really means
So if we fall in love tomorrow I know it will end the sorrow
When we walk away without any whispers Knowing she'll be in my heart and i will miss her
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Post by alostandbrokensoul on Dec 14, 2004 20:31:44 GMT -5
Another wonderfully written piece, just another to add to the collections of wonderful pieces or work. Your poetry leaves me with the images of a heart torn and shattered into a thousand pieces that cant be put together again, you capture the bleeding broken heart so well, congrats on another wonderful write.
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Dec 16, 2004 16:33:08 GMT -5
This is nice too!
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