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Post by alostandbrokensoul on Dec 12, 2004 13:46:35 GMT -5
maybe i look for sympathy because i dont know what to do maybe i look for sympathy for all the pain ive been put through.
Maybe i enjoy pain because it's all ive ever felt maybe i enjoy pain because that's the hand ive been dealt.
maybe i like morbid things because im twisted in the head maybe i like morbid things because i wouldnt mind being dead.
Maybe i like the darkness because it's the only comfort for me maybe i like the darkness because it's all i can see.
maybe i like death because ive come so close maybe i like death because that's all my life shows.
Maybe I like to be this way because im just being me maybe i like to be this way because its the way i want to be.
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Seth
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Post by Seth on Dec 12, 2004 20:53:37 GMT -5
I love this simple, real-to-life poem. You've written this so lovely... Usually repetitive poems grow tedious and tiresome, but this really held my attention and captivated me. Lovely done.
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Dec 16, 2004 16:33:45 GMT -5
Great again.
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