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Dec 11, 2004 23:32:05 GMT -5
Post by Broken hope on Dec 11, 2004 23:32:05 GMT -5
So little happiness through the years Knowing pain and finding his fears
Walking in rain just to cry No one can see, no one would care if he died
Always dissapointing her or him or mother or father Expected to fail so why even bother
Silence is the only innocent word to speak Written in a letter just last week
About how he was so in love with no one How he could be content being anyone
So many lines to so many riddles Written on his wrist and carved down the middle
Can he be a martyr for or just a memory Does it really matter now that his skin is shattering
Expected to fail, does what they want Dies silently with what he was taught
He was told love is true and real Wasn't warned of the pain it could deal
So little love left in his heart Does he deserve a brand new start
Nothing is wrong but nothing is right Maybe he can pull "out of mind, out of sight"
It's not easy to break his mothers heart It's not easy to make a new start
Sometimes the hard way to go is the best Just wants to end the beating in his chest
Not remembered, not mourned for Nothing to live for, and everything to die for
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Dec 12, 2004 12:15:22 GMT -5
Post by Seth on Dec 12, 2004 12:15:22 GMT -5
You're tired of me I'm sure, but
this is absolutely mesmorizing and engrossing--it has that emotional-pull that really relates and bleeds such truth and realism. I don't know if this is from actual emotion, personal feelings, but whether yes or no, you've again masterfully written a very deep, intense write of something a lot of people can and do relate to. Beautiful and tragic piece, I love it. I love everything about this, -these two stanzas really rang true to me.
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Dec 12, 2004 13:21:33 GMT -5
Post by alostandbrokensoul on Dec 12, 2004 13:21:33 GMT -5
yeah i think i have to agree with Seth, this was wonderful and an amazing write and I really dont think that I could say anything more than wow......
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Dec 12, 2004 20:35:59 GMT -5
Post by Broken hope on Dec 12, 2004 20:35:59 GMT -5
everything i write is true emotion... its rly not about good or bad... its about if im happy with the way i expressed myself
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