NeverMore
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Beethoven Looking f*g
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Apr 25, 2004 11:50:38 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on Apr 25, 2004 11:50:38 GMT -5
How do you guard your heart
when you set it free
where do you draw the line
to say this is your stand
can you tell when to embrace
how to say the words
let out the emotions
that swell within your soul
do you grasp all that you can
do you let love be free
do you pull it in
with all the strength you have
or do you let go
let it be what it must
for then if love be
love will truly be
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Apr 26, 2004 23:58:44 GMT -5
Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 26, 2004 23:58:44 GMT -5
Very nice Joe. I enjoyed the simplistic nature of this piece. Yet, it also had some complexity. It had some high points and low points which kept it interesting until the very end.
Very good job, Tj
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Hunter
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Fallen Angel
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Apr 29, 2004 4:58:24 GMT -5
Post by Hunter on Apr 29, 2004 4:58:24 GMT -5
Good.
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May 4, 2004 10:12:07 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on May 4, 2004 10:12:07 GMT -5
very good piece...i love how you used different way of saying the same thing to bring home the point that you're not sure whether letting your emotions go free is the best ...great job!
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May 5, 2004 20:32:02 GMT -5
Post by Mikepoet on May 5, 2004 20:32:02 GMT -5
Wise words here.
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