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Post by DeadlySilence on Apr 26, 2004 16:29:25 GMT -5
Dead Soul Set Free
Inside I'm beyond dead, But still I continue to try. I fight on, Just to say that I "lived" And so other won't say That she just gave up.
Surrounded by hate... Surrounded by angry... Surrounded by silence...
It's all making me more crazy... All the silence, Makes the voices in my head So much stronger and louder. It makes me want to crawl up the wall, But I force them to shut up instead.
Changing lives... Changing hearts... Changing who I am...
Look into my eyes, So you can see the emptiness And lifelessness inside me. My heart may be beating still, But my soul flew off On the wings of a dove so long ago.
4-26-2004
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Hunter
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Fallen Angel
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Post by Hunter on Apr 27, 2004 3:36:04 GMT -5
Excellent.
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Post by DeadlySilence on Apr 27, 2004 14:33:18 GMT -5
Thank you, Hawk.
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NeverMore
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Post by NeverMore on Apr 27, 2004 14:51:45 GMT -5
I liked this very much, and for some reason when I read it.. something came to mind to say..
wake up in the morning breathe get up and walk smell the air no matter how dark the day there is always hope on the wings of that dove.
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Post by DeadlySilence on Apr 27, 2004 14:53:34 GMT -5
Thank you.
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